Wednesday 2 December 2015

JB SS : Tum Saath ho Part 1

 TUM SAATH HO 

"There's something about childhood friends that you just can't replace "

He is sitting near the lake's shore No one love him his cousin makes fun of his tone his mom says when he ll grow up his speaking tone will automatically become like others but why not Now ???he thinks and his thought moves to his next a girl standing her arms crosses over her chest looking angry  .....

Tumala Naam tya hai (what is you name ) 4 years old Jai ask her in his stammering tone (baby tone) not able to make sentence in clear hindi  ...

She looks down at him "Mela naam Tani hai (My name is Bani ) same age Bani replies in same stammering tone yet angry tone..

Ale tum bhi meli talah totla bolti ho..tome sit with me (hey you also stammer like me...come sit with me ) Jai replies with Joy because he finds someone like him...

All her anger towards her friends and cousin who teased her over her stammers ( baby tone ) vanishes when she heard Jai's voice someone like her...she sits next to him....

Tum taha lehti ho....(where do you live )..Jai asks her while take a stone and throws in lake...

Main...Wo...totaity ( society ) me Nelw Ghal hai Naa wo mela hai....(Me..i live that new house in society)  Bani replies him...

Ohh To Tum  ho DO mele ghal ke baju wale ghal me lahne aaye the 4 din pele (so you ppl came to live next my house 4 days ago ) Jai asks her again

She nods her head...

Tum itnne dusse me kyu thi (why were u so angry )...Jai asks innocently...

Wo mele ilitataing coutins and  tuch frienls aaye the unhone mude chilaya (wo mere irritating friends aaye the unhone mujhe chidya (some of my irritating cousin and friends came they teased me )

Ohh to tumko bhi tab tidate hai (so you are also teased by all ) Jai ask her again...

She nods tears brimming in her eyes Jai looks at her dont know what to do........

then His mother's face comes in front of him when Some teased him and he cried his mother cups his face and wipes his tears and takes him in hug consoles him ....Hmm mute bhi yahi talna chahiye (hmm i should do this )

He cups her face and wipes her tears and takes her in his small hug She hugs him back

(her cousin sister's face comes in front of her eyes when her cousin was hugging any boy at School she asked her cousin she said My boyfriend)

both separates and Bani with the same innocence " Hum Gl-friend Boy friend " hai kya...(are we girlfriend boyfriend ??)

Jai looks at her thinks of his favourite Tv Advertisement of Mcdownland and mimics  in same tone

(If anybody wants to see ad here is link 

" No gl-friends Bahut demanding hoti hai Mude ye chahiye wo chahiye "(No girlfriends are so demanding i want this i want that )

Bani laughs over his mimicry and she mimics too " But Mujhe to bus ek Mc aloo tikki chahiye "

(But i just want Mc aloo tikki )

Jai laughs too and continues his mimicry "ESA KYa then tik hai (Oh like this ok then ) then he shows her his cheeks he is thinking that like TV ad Girl kisses the boy on cheeks So Bani ll kiss too

Bani laughs more on this....

He again points on his cheeks .....Bani shows him tongue and runs away towards  her house Jai too runs behind her...shouting her name

tani ....tani luto main bhi aa laha ru...(Bani...Bani wait for me i am coming too )



"Childhood is a journey not Race "

12 year later

"What the hell" i just taught you and you duffer forget it in seconds where the hell were you mind you brainless jerk" Bani shouts on Jai and throws his notebook on his face stands up and takes water and gulps in one go puts back the glass with huge thud sound and comes again on the bed where both Jai and Bani practising thier Maths Sums tomorrow their Maths Exam and Jai forget formula of (a+b)2= a2+b2+2ab

Jai who hides his face behind the book pops his head like a scared kitten when he sees Bani's Red Angry face and hides again

From last 12 year Bani and he is best buddy They went to same school and same class Jai protected her from bullies and Bani did all his homework and school stuff to save him from his parents and teacher

Time passed like this but Both are inseparable Jai is far away from study but he is creative he wants to became an architect like this father but his biggest problem is Study upto class 9th Only Bani saved him otherwise he ddnt even pass his 5th class exams Bani taught him one night before exams and he passed on boundaries but Apart from her best buddy Bani is so intelligent and Caring She wants to become Astronaut Jai teased her always that She ddnt even carry herself how she ll carry A Spaceship .....

Back to present

Bani comes seat in front of him catches his book and puts on bed  Jai looks at her...

"Give me your mobile " Bani extends her hand...

Jai knows what comes next  he puts his mobile in her hand without asking anything

She sees 4 message from sanjana and looks at him again "So here were your mind "

Ohh Jai how many times i told you she is 2 years older and dumbo failed 2 times in class 10 and still with us"

"She is Hot" Jai blurts out and bites his tongue....

Bani throws his phone on bed and says "then please go to her and she ll surly help you to pass this board exam " and winks

No No i swear  to our friendship i will concentrate on study now lets start again Jai tells her

How many times i told you not to take fake Swear of our friendship what If its break Bani yells him

Ohh that ll never happens thats why i he stops and looks at Bani who is all red in anger

" Jai you are Pig" says this she hits him with pillow he yells in pain

2 hour later

Almost done Jai now you can sleep i have to read more She says to Jai...Jai who is waiting for this words falls in her lap.....and murmurs Lori gaa do bus ab Bani mujhe acchi neend aa jaaegi to main Kal exam acche se De paaunga (Now sing lullaby so that i can sleep peacefully and my exam ll be rocking )

Bani who did same thing before the exam from past 12 years knows that however Jai shows his coolness in school and in front of  girls he is so scared before exam and the only way to put him sleep is sign Lullaby

She starts Singing



Pal bhar thahar jaao
                                Dil ye sambhal jaaye
Kaise tumhe roka karun
                                Meri taraf aata har gham phisal jaaye
Aankhon mein tum ko bharun
                                 Bin bole baatein tumse karun
'gar tum saath ho..
                           Agar tum saath ho


She  caress his forehead his eyes looks now sleepy she sings more


Behti rehti..
Nahar nadiya si teri duniya mein
Meri duniya hai teri chaahaton mein
Main dhal jaati hoon teri aadaton mein
'gar tum saath ho



TBC



Wednesday 4 November 2015

You are the last one part 3

"HIV POSITIVE"

He read this....Again and again Really how....One min He recalls all his incidents...

Beach party...fight with Pia...Then that patch ..hug Kiss....S#X....

OMG that unprotected S#x .....F##K...Pia she cheated on Me and she has AIDS and She

he puts his hands on his mouth...ohh My God....i ll kill her.....No how can i...soon i ll die too....

Ohh God There is No cure to this disease ,,,how can she did this to me.....

A message appears to his phone...its from Pia....

Welcome to the Club Jai...with evil laugh.......

He fumes with anger  open his car door he slips inside and Drives with Full speed....

he met Pia 4 month ago and fallen in love in first place...He is India's well known Business tycoon and Pia was hot-shot model...They met again and again and Jai decided to propose her on beach party but she ruined the proposal in her drunk state and they fought....Pia started crying aloud and somehow Jai console her and they landed in Bed without unprotected S*x because Jai ddnt planed to make love at confession Night ....

He runs his hand in his hair in frustration....that means Pia already slept with so many men and she did know about her diseases....oh god how can someone is so cheap ....

His thoughts interrupted by a figure crossing road in front of his Eyes....."i know her " he says himself

whats her name....Rani....no..no Dhani............... What is the name....he stops the Car and take a reverse ...slid down windows in front of her.....

she banned down to window's level and about to say : "hey han....  but she shocks to see Jai in front of her eyes....

He is too equally shocks to see her in this attire "is this same girl whom i rejected Three months ago when my Best friend cum Brother Aditya set a proposal for me...yes got it Bani" he thinks and says: hello Bani nice to see you....he says push away the earlier thoughts from his mind....

"Hey Jai" Nice to see you how are you ??? Bani replies with hesitation in her voice...

"Hmmm " he looks her again from top to bottom  not able to control his eyes bcom big like saucer when he notices her shorts just below her waist too short even micro short is micro in front of this....

She very well know about his gaze...before she could say anything he signal her to sit in the Car...

she  without wasting single second sit in car...he starts the Car and looks at her..."If this is (pointing to her dress)result of my rejection then i m regretting on my decision   Now  Care to explain ???"

Ah...hmmm she search for words.....

Its ok if you dont want he says her without looking at her....

So hows life...he starts the convo....

Horrible she replies

he stares at her...what ????

oh nothing just my job sucks me...she quickly changes the topic

Hows about you and hows your girlfriend Jai for her you rejected me she says and giggles....

He laughs too and says that was the stupidest decision of my life he blurts to her...

she is taken aback with his reply what does that mean Jai....you came to my house three month ago...vikJai bhaiya sent your   proposal  to my father  even i was equally agaist to this but we met ...me bcoz of my father and you bcoz of VikJai Bhaiya then when we start our conversion your 1st sentence was " i cant marry to you " i was so relief to hear this and then you said you met a model Pia and wants to marry her but you wanted some time...and Now you are saying you are regretting to that decision what u actually want ????Bani says all this in one breath in almost in anger stubbed in her voice .....

Pia and me we....he hesitates to say thisbut he have to share this dont know what god have decided for him but this is a sign from god and he met with Bani again

Pia gave me the ultimate gift Bani"...he says with heavy voice....

What i ddnt get you Jai ???? She replies try to look away....

She gave me " AIDS" Bani he says looking at her She shocks to hear this her expression changed from anger to completely shock...What she heard the same  Word "AIDS" yes its AIDS who is eating her from last 10 days Now she hears that the person Who rejected her for her girlfriend and her girlfriend gave him "AIDS" If he ddnt have girlfriend that time may be he ll give that alliance one chance he himself told her that time

her minds go back to that end of the conversation

Jai : Bani are you ok look i was forced by Aditya to meet you

Bani : hmmm i am fine actually i too  forced to agree on this alliance

Jai : ohh that relief...but i must say you are beautiful if i ddnt committed with Pia i ll surly give this alliance one chance

Bani blushed ....I am thinking same she says and both leave and Jai says No to Aditya which he passed to Bani's parents

"What happen Bani "    Jai 's voice breaks her thought.....

"Nothing " she carefully brushes  her tears away

and awkward silence between them and He halts the Car in front of Dixit's mention

Bani looks at him in and he looks at her..." Do you want me to drop you upto door i dnt think so Nishikant uncle ll appreciate this"

"i dont live here...can you please drop me at next taxi stop hope i ll catch taxi from there" she says with cold voice...

"i ll drop you where u lives tell me the address" Jai replies her not averting his gaze from her

"No Its ok i ll manage " she replies not looking at him

"Bani  he says in low voice tell me whats wrong and is there anything which i dont know"

Now this time Bani looks directly in his eyes but her vision is blur because of her eyes full of tears....after leaving her house this is the first time she cried....

Jai looks at her teary eyes and takes her in his arms....there is something wrong which he dont know he thinks but his heart ache hering her loud sob she cried and cried in his arms untill her eyes dried....

She comes out of his hug....and about to come out of the car he holds her wrist...tell me Bani what  happened why  you left your house and why you were crying like mad"

"So you dont know" she asks him

"KNOW" what he replies....

I too Have "AIDS ".......



   

Saturday 24 October 2015

Real Story (Character Jani ) : You Are the Last One Part 2

Hello friends here is 2nd Part No proof reading so advance  sorry for Mistakes

Part 2

 LifeLine Hospital LIG Square Indore

how is she ??? Rano asks choking her voice tears flowing like river from her eyes....

"SHe is not in condition to talk just wait for some time to she have to be strong but she is in shock....They ....They forced her so many times" ......doctor says looking down to floor " We just pray to god"

15 hours later

Hospital Room  

Inspector : How many they were ???

Bani stammers and Sobs : F....Fo....Four

Inspector : how many Times ???

Bani : wh...what...???

Inspector asks shamelessly again "  How many times they forced on you  "

Bani looks up Rano while grabbing the sheets of bed her eyes flooded with tears how can someone ask her  how many times she Raped by Four men in Car.....she breaks down hearing this

Rano : Look inspector she is not in condition to answer your question can u please leave Now she needs some rest and  i know who they are

Inspector : how do you know ???

Rano : One of them is my boyfriend

Inspector : so you know the plans

What Nonsense Rano barks over him ....

Look Miss this is the procedure of the investigation So she has to answer my all question So where we were inspector looks at Bani  again and ask again how many time ???

Bani who is still shivering wants to die but she has to fight back not for her for her parents and for lil sister.....Crying shivering she replies in her stammering Tone....Fif....Fifteen More than Fifteen time she says and hide her face in Rano's  embrace .....

Ok Last one....Do you recognize them ???

Bani with anger filled in her voice this time replies him " yes i can and if you not able to give them punishment i ll kill them with my bare hands Says this she try to get up but fails Rano give her support to stands on her feet she looks at inspector ,wipes her tears at just her Stall over her shoulder  " Anything else Inspector"

N...No he stands on his feet and leave ......

Rano i want to go home she says this and enters in washroom.....



5 day later.....

Mom Dad,  Pia Why dont u came to meet me.....Bani ask them feeling hurt No one from her family came to meet her...only support was there in hospital was Rano and her friends

No one reply to her she runs to her room and slam the door break down on floor "what wrong she had done She had raped by 4men and No one from her family came to support her".....



Another 5 days passed by like this she had visited hospital ,police station several times

Aprajeet and his friends  have got bailed and they are Now free......

Same Day Life Line Hospital

Bani is waiting for her medical report along with Rano  she is now better  She has no family support But she ll fight for her justice...

Nurse comes  with  report in her hands

"Whats wrong" Rano ask nurse

"i suggest you to read your own " nurse gives reports in Bani's hand She open Reports and falls on the chair

1 hour later

Bani's house

Aprajeet with his friends seated with Bani's parents and her lil sister Pia

Aprajeet : look uncle i ll come directly to the point  what i have done is crime but that happened i cant change the past but i can change  the future " your future and your's lil daughter future i ll give you 50 lakh to keep your daughter's mouth shut  "

Kiran and Nishikant looks at him with open mouth

Kiran : did you said 50 Lakh ???

Aprajeet : yes

Kiran : we are agree on this but you have to give all money in cash

Ahswin :" Deal "

He shakes hands with them and leaves

Bani who have just arrived to main gate heard all their conversion cant believe on her parents Her parents sold out their principle their soul their pride to the person who have raped their Daughter....how disgusting she thought

She hide behind the gate and Aprajeet leave with his friends She enters in house and looks at their parents face there is no sign of sympathy she glares them and says : So finally you sold your honesty your principle to that Animal  "

Kiran : so you have heard everything good Now listen you ll get cancel your FIR against him he ll set all our future just think about your lil siter No one marry to her .....is that clear she says in cold voice

Bani : No its not and I am leaving this house right Now....says this she enters in her room and throw her medical report to the corner  cry her heart out ....

after some time she packs her bag takes a last glance over her room  her eyes falls on that report she picks up report and read it Once again and put inside her bag but Lines in red colour roaming in front of her Eyes

" HIV POSITIVE"




Tuesday 20 October 2015

Real Story (Character Jani ) : You Are the Last One Part 1



NOTE : This is real story i have just change the character names and places etc and this story may offend you,you may be hate me after reading this  and some may register FIR  against mine but i have decided to post so here is 1st part i ll continue after only some good responses otherwise i wont continue )

Main aaj kasam khati hai Jab tak Jinda hu Jab tak har ek aadmi Jaat se badla naa le lu Jab tak main Chain ki Saas Nahi lungi (I swear untill i ll alive i ll take revenge to every Man  otherwise i ll not breath with relief )....she swears this and Takes out her makeup box sit in front of the mirror Starting applying makeup her minds back to 2 months ago.....

Arey Bani chal naa kitna padegi Pad pad ke Aankhe naa kharab kar lena (tran : Hey Bani how much you ll read you ll damage your eyes if u study like this )

Her friends nudge on her shoulder and whispers finally i ll loose my virginity tonight....

Bani looks back her in shock expression " This is all you want in your life but let me tell you this is not achievement " says this she puts her books in her bag and stands up looks around all her friends waiting for her..they are going to movie tonight and her best friend Rano finally got chance to sleep with her boyfriend Aparajeet ....

After Movie in front of Theatre :

Byee Bani wish me luck says this Rano burst on her own PJ....Bani makes faces

Aparajeet  : Bani if u want we can drop you

Bani  coldly No thanx i can manage

Rano : o common Bani chal aaja (come ) and she drags her in Aparajeet 's  Swift car

Bani sit alone on back seat and Rano is blabbering on front seat along with Aparajeet  is driving he takes out his phone and Type a message on his phone : 1st Job done be ready to execute 2nd one " and sent....

He looks in rear mirror and gives devil smile to Bani who can smell  something  is fishy and the way to her house is long one not the as usual short way she takes daily.....she crosses her arms over her chest take a deep breath and close her eyes....about a  minute passes and she jolts open her eyes and shocks 1 men open the Door of her side and give her a tight push she half down on her seat and another men enters opposite side of the Car and sit in car...another one throws Rano out from  the Car and he sits in front seat.....

Now she is alone with  4 men (including Aparajeet  ) in the Car....................